This version is proofread and there is a few changes in the script and choices

Will you create bond with your companions? And maybe, will you find love on the way? There is no sprite for her, since I wanted the player to identify with the character. The demo is approximately 20-30 minutes reading. What did you like the most in the demo?_ Doreen:What are the chances of her getting pregnant [...]
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Michelle:
Should I ask her out (READ DETAILS)?
(6 November 2016)

Marquita:
Does she want to get back together or is it definitely not happening?
(6 November 2016)

Evalyn:
Am I going too far?
(6 November 2016)

Evalyn:
Now he won't reply to my texts and acts like I don't exist.
(6 November 2016)

Evalyn:
So anyways I told him we needed a break and after that, I started dressing with less clothes, talking to other guys and partying ect.. All the things that he HATES.
(6 November 2016)

Evalyn:
So my bf kept trying to make me jealous by flirting with different girls... That's not how he is usually, he's a good guy but I guess he felt neglected ever since I went to uni.
(6 November 2016)

Ivelisse:
Fay or Faye?
(6 November 2016)

Jeri:
Why don't more ladies put a body shot as the main pic on their dating site profiles?
(6 November 2016)

Jeri:
You'll get better results that way I'm thinking.
(6 November 2016)

Delma:
Should I ask him about or just keep talking to him like nothing has changed?
(6 November 2016)